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Topic : Low cost air companies, are they worth it ?
** Our presentation : **


 * ==http://www.slideshare.net/secret/AlRiPTT2GEKLvN==

__Corrections of presentation slides:__ slide 5: __tickets are__ expensive if you wait __until__ the last moment, slide 7: journeys are __cheaper__ traditional airline companies __have__ adjusted __their__ prices.

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Audio / Video :
 * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bLGE-059_Ss&feature=related
 * http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/uk_news/magazine/8297211.stm

= = = Summary :=
 * [[file:Team A presentation.doc]]

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 * General Comments**

//Communication// The transitions between speakers were good, and the presentation was quite easy to follow. Sometimes individuals were difficult to understand and not all the important material was shown on the slides.

//Slides// Nice presentation, but some English errors.

//Content// Slides 5 and 6 seemed to repeat very similar information (disadvantages) and the overall impression was of a non-debate - you did not seem to find an issue (problem, question) to investigate.


 * Specific comments on oral language**

Slide 1 (Pascal) You need to stand where you can see the screen and the audience. You sound very hesitant (one VERY long pause); you didn't practice enough.

Slide 3, 4 (Jean Sebastien) Good speed, but not always easy to understand. Some important information seems missing from Slide 3.

paCIFic beGINNing suCCESS since 10 years we have more than 5% LUGgage

Slide 5 (Jessica) You sound rather hesitant and stilted. You need to speak more loudly and slightly more quickly. More practice needed.

disadVANTages if you want UNTIL the last minute

Slide 6 (Florent) You made a good effort to learn the specific vocabulary (headrest covers), your delivery is good. You should work on speaking a little more quickly.

CANCelled you must to wait > you have to wait (you must wait) to catch a round-trip ticket > to buy a round-trip ticket

Slide 7 (Pascal) Better fluency, but problems pronouncing plural and 3rd person singular s in present tense, and not always easy to understand.

deMOCratises low cost companies